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From the Beginning: A cosmic love story
Another short that I'm working on. Here's some art for you.
Another short that I'm working on. Here's some art for you.
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I can't actually submit a critique, but I can sure write one for ya.
First impression = Wow! I'm a fan of the air glow effect, and this is definitely an eye-catcher. There isn't anything negative to say about this at all.
Having said that, the background could have more life to it. I like the symbols and the glowy spiral, but I can see details behind the two figures that are just out of focus and hard to see. My suggestion would be to make the background either a bit brighter or sharper to contrast with the darker figures. That way more attention is brought to the figures in front and still have a pleasing background.
But again, not a bad piece! I love it! <faves>
First impression = Wow! I'm a fan of the air glow effect, and this is definitely an eye-catcher. There isn't anything negative to say about this at all.
Having said that, the background could have more life to it. I like the symbols and the glowy spiral, but I can see details behind the two figures that are just out of focus and hard to see. My suggestion would be to make the background either a bit brighter or sharper to contrast with the darker figures. That way more attention is brought to the figures in front and still have a pleasing background.
But again, not a bad piece! I love it! <faves>